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    I remember how your body felt
    enveloping around me
    posing above me
    sealing the space inside me

    I remember how you kiss felt
    billowing between us
    smoothing over my skin
    landing on my lips

    I remember how your words felt
    dangling between our air
    lingering over us
    encompassing my mind

    I remember how your breath felt
    teasing my goose bumps
    tickling my ears
    tasting my salt

    all of this goes through my mind

    as I watch you eating
    as I watch you conversing
    as I watch you smiling
    as I watch you forgetting
    everything about me

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    very sensual.... *sweats*

    then i got to the end and missed my orgasm completely. [img]redface.gif[/img]


    good! [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]

    (i'd say 8 on the scale, hanny!) =)

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    Very powerfull.
    I enjoyed this peice.
    It packed a punch, but at the same time was very smooth and mellow, flowing along.
    Hmmm.. how to describe how this felt..
    Like riding on a rogue wave.... one that's huge, and very powerfull, and meaningfull, but the ride at the top is so smooth, and your just floating along without a hitch...
    that's how it read to me.
    I liked it.

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