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September 17th, 2002, 04:40 AM
#1
Inactive Member
I remember how your body felt
enveloping around me
posing above me
sealing the space inside me
I remember how you kiss felt
billowing between us
smoothing over my skin
landing on my lips
I remember how your words felt
dangling between our air
lingering over us
encompassing my mind
I remember how your breath felt
teasing my goose bumps
tickling my ears
tasting my salt
all of this goes through my mind
as I watch you eating
as I watch you conversing
as I watch you smiling
as I watch you forgetting
everything about me
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September 18th, 2002, 12:21 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
very sensual.... *sweats*
then i got to the end and missed my orgasm completely. [img]redface.gif[/img]
good! [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]
(i'd say 8 on the scale, hanny!) =)
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September 18th, 2002, 11:13 PM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
Very powerfull.
I enjoyed this peice.
It packed a punch, but at the same time was very smooth and mellow, flowing along.
Hmmm.. how to describe how this felt..
Like riding on a rogue wave.... one that's huge, and very powerfull, and meaningfull, but the ride at the top is so smooth, and your just floating along without a hitch...
that's how it read to me.
I liked it.
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